L04: Drafts

Draft 1

This is a draft, almost a sketch with getting ideas together for the music video. Having a play with clips and out takes to get a feel for what I want the video to look like based on the narrative while also getting feedback from the artist so that we know we are on the same page. Having close ups of the artist in the mash and his music equipment as we planned. I completely changed this intro as it now starts with Charles Manson and barely contains any of these clips as they were just out takes and unusable.

Draft 2

This draft is the first containing many clips of Charles Manson and the Manson family which links to the narrative and music as there is samples of Manson throughout the song talking about what he did and why he did it, also the Manson family girls laughing in parts is exactly where the clips of the girls come into place to give that bleakness and darkness as the video takes you on a journey.

This is my final draft of using clips that are uncut and unedited during the live recording of 'SINES' looking back on my video all together I have now seen all the clips I have an haven't used and exactly why to show I have followed the codes and conventions of a real music video and also what made a good video into a great video.